Snus Haiku

[snusnoose]

Many of you are prolific and talented writers. Please accept the Snus Haiku Challenge

What is Haiku you ask? A haiku is a non-rhymed verse genre.There are 5 syllables in the first sentence, 7 in the second and 5 again in the last sentence. The word Haiku comes from the Japanese word meaning "Light Verse."

I'll kick it off ~

Sense of well being
Delicious smokey goodness
Pop some in your mouth

[texasmade]

Peatmoss smells adrift
Like Fallen leaves on the ground
Gellivare, Landstroms

Thunder and mint mix
Under my lip, snow blankets
Cold, wet flavours drip

Evergreen citrus
Fine ground pine and earthiness
Springs Gotlandssnus Gul

Beaten by seasons
Weathered, Rustic, coarse and rough
Tough it out, Grovsnus


from the other thread

[snusnoose]

Well done! Puts mine to shame.....

[LaZeR]

Man who make love
On ground
Have Peace On Earth.

/Thread

[NismoDan]

Haikus are easy
Though they often don't make sense
Refrigerator

[snusnoose]

Lazer, Is that a personal mantra, or preferred proclivity?
I can dig it, but it aint a haiku. Please give it another shot: 5 syllables - 7 syllables - 5 syllables Voila' haiku

[danielan]

Lazer, Is that a personal mantra, or preferred proclivity?
I can dig it, but it aint a haiku. Please give it another shot: 5 syllables - 7 syllables - 5 syllables Voila' haiku

Aren't haiku also supposed to mention a season?

http://www.cc.matsuyama-u.ac.jp/~shi...t-Writing.html

STEP 3) Rules:

• 3-short lines
• 1-season word
• 1-cutting word
• no rhyme or metaphor
• (17 syllables, 5-7-5)

[RobsanX]

The PACT act sucks @!?$
The government can blow me
Bipartisan law

[danielan]

I posted on the other thread: http://www.snuson.com/forum/showthre...643-Snus-Haiku

But flattery will get you a haiku:

In summer, snus stops
PACT Act or searing heat comes
no new snus for me

[snusnoose]

Nice!
I guess I should have done a haiku search before starting this thread. Damn I'm lazy...

[snusgetter]

Damn I'm lazy...

Now turn that into a haiku

[snusnoose]

Now turn that into a haiku

Damn I'm a lazy slob
Too lazy to search past threads
Summer numbs the mind

[texasmade]

let's spice it up a bit and do last line haiku's where you start yours with the last line that the person above you wrote.

Summer numbs the mind
As does smoking PCP
Overdose on snus

[danielan]

Overdose on snus
I am still hiccuping as
the leaves fall gently

[snusgetter]

The leaves fall gently
I must stop hiccuping before
Overdosing on snus



OK?