Snus Haiku

[Azrsuperstar]

Snus by Azr



Under salty lips
Searing flavor for masses
We are all Norsemen



I really need to stop drinking. :twisted:



This should be worth at least one free can of General Portion from buysnus.com. HA HA

[MN_Snuser]

<hugs Azr>

That's so right on man.

[Starcadia]

LOL!

Smoked again this week
At the beach with an old friend
Fun, but missed my snus

[Asquar]

Signs blare Smoke Free Zone,
But I have baked a prilla
And just ignore them

[Starcadia]

A full day back home
With Skruf, N&J and Grov
So long, cigarettes!

[gentlemanly]

The wife no like snus
No Kissy with my juiced teeth
It sucks but its great!

[itchystiches]

Snus is a tobacco
It's my favorite delivery tool
When it comes to nicotine
Skruf kicks like a mule.

[koops]

buzz buzz drip
my coat no longer smells,
a deep breath

[Starcadia]

Not trying to be a know-it-all, but Haiku form is as follows:

First line = 5 syllables
Second line = 7 syllables
Third line = 5 syllables

[Subtilo]

Two of my passions in one place; poetry and snus! I love you guys :lol:

[Sjulimann]

Snus snus
i sus og dus, ja, ja!

[snusfather]

Pelting spring rain falls
snus under a dripping hat
my lip flexes warmth

[Asquar]

Pelting spring rain falls
snus under a dripping hat
my lip flexes warmth

The truest snus haiku yet, as not only does traditional haiku (as exists in English) have the strict syllabic count, but it should also contain tangible, concrete references to a season, or nature as it exists in season. Well done!

[aika]

my clothes smell quite fresh
but im not an ass at work
thus i thank you snus

[snusfather]

To Asquar: Ahh... A true traditional haiku connoisseur. Thanks for the compliment